Cover Letter Advice, URGENT !
The situation is I was referred by a banker for this role. Anything else i could add to my cover letter? Do u think this is enough juice?
Dear Hiring Manager,
I was referred to you by PERSON for the Corporate Finance Analyst role at XYZ company. I recently graduated with a degree in XYZ majoring in finance in Melbourne, Australia.
My motivation for pursuing a Corporate Finance position stems from the fulfilling nature of cross-border transactions and deal complexities. I believe being a part of XYZ Company would expose me to this environment, at the same time inspire me to perform at my greatest potentials and grow professionally. I am also inspired by **XYZ's **cross-border operations, mostly in Asia as it is the market where I see myself working in.
Work experience wise, my last internship at ABC Bank has strengthened my quantitative and communicative skillsets. I am strong technically with financial modelling, numerical analysis/methods and quantitative research. In addition, I am proficient in Vietnamese and believe that it will a valuable asset at your company. I am confident my experiences and eagerness will place me in strong stead to succeed in the** XYZ role.**
I look forward to joining and contributing to your company. I would welcome an opportunity to discuss my qualifications with you at your earliest convenience.
A copy of my CV is enclosed for your review.
I can be contacted at EMAIL AND NUMBER
Many thanks
Regards,
Signature
How the fuck is this URGENT?
I need it sent out by tonight.
lmao slow your roll kid. I would avoid name-dropping so blatantly, work it in to the letter and sandwich it in between paragraphs. Spin it like "I'd like to apply because bla bla bla, i also met some employees, one of whom is X who actually referred me to the role".
"I am strong technically" is something id imagine the OG terminator saying trying to fit in at a canning company
There's also basically no actual details about what makes you a good candidate
Don't say "I look forward to joining and contributing to your company" when you're applying for an interview
Please fix and redistribute. Thx
Thank you for your advice
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